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 It is difficult to understand the connection to the studio brief? Perhaps I could research ways that moving images/media are incorporated into contemporary designs for wellness centres such as the Comvita Wellness Lab by Blur the Lines studio. This will help to make my proposed spaces even more dynamic and answer the brief.

The proposed lighting design in my scheme does not emphasise the fluid lines of the ceiling and furniture design. Try to avoid downlights and consider how I might incorporate lighting as part of your surface designs. Revisit case studies which incorporate lights as a way of modelling the curved surfaces and activating the sculptural approach to space. The uses of digital media will help here. I could employ mesh LED in my design to create interiors from light, colour and image.

Consider having the curved wall/bench have an intent form to allocate to people's profiles.

The next step is to generate a detailed section through my proposed wellness centre. Consider how I might create a variety of spaces – different heights and intersecting volumes. The bodily and curvilinear lines could flow through and between the floor levels, connecting spaces above and below, and create a counterpoint to the straight lines of the existing building.

At the moment the spaces feel too uniform – a bit flat (compressed), in comparison to the lively surface design work. The biophilic dimension of your work could be enhanced through digital media, light, and colour. Consider the sensory dimension of biophilia beyond the placement of office plants into furniture components/screens. 

Work out how it relates to the studio brief of cinematic space, and develop the wellness centre as a complete sensory experience.